nice
This song is pretty cool. I'd say it fits more into the ambience category than a hope of joy. The very end was way cool, and so were the pads around the middle. The only thing I don't like about these two songs is how they hop from style to style. One other thing you might want to try is to add a couple more instrumentals playing at the same time to fill up the sound. If you had an entire song made with that layed back beat in the end, that would be pretty cool. These two songs have a lot of potential, keep up the good work!