It is an honor to have someone make a music video of a sort for one of my songs (something serious I mean). You have a good idea and It thrilled me to see that someone picked up on the imagery given off by the song. I always thought of a pond + twighlight setting when I listened to it. You have inspired me to make an actual music video! Something using a digital camera though, because I couldn't use flash if it meant my life.
All I really saw though, were simple objects being moved accross the screen. If you put more effort into the art, maybe team up with somebody else for help, then you would have a magnificent flash. You say you made it in one afternoon, well, yes that won't quite work if you are going for quality, so I can't say you're a bad artist, you just need to put more time and devotion into it.
Its already been said, but I agree that you should devote more time into a flash. Perhaps make it a week project, if you have that kind of discipline. I would love to see a remake of the flash if you ever decide to get around to it. Good luck and keep flashing!
I might make another one SIMILAR to this if you make more ambient music (hint hint). I have learnt my lesson with this though (week or 2-3 weeks per project is good). Thanks for the for the decent score, and thanks for your fantastic music!
I liked it, it made me giggle. But I'm pretty sure it could have been presented a little better. You could hear the narrator turning the mic on and off, which can be avoided by pushing the stop record button instead of turning the mic off. Another thing i felt took away from the humor was the voices. Though what they were saying was pretty funny, I felt it wasn't presented with enough energy or proper tone of voice to do it effectively. The art, i'm sure you realize could have been drawn better, but its not entirely necessary because this is humor. Overall it was pretty cool, not interesting enough to make me throw my pants off, but it was interesting. Keep at it and you'll only get better.
Thanks for using my song by the way!
Yeah, the mic thing, that's some wierd problem with Audacity. I'd use sound recorder, but you can only go in 30 second intervals D:
The humor, eh, I tried, but I had a bad cold this weekend. Thus my overly nasally voice, and I deepened it to try and cover it up. Didn't do great, as you could probably tell.
And you're welcome, I wish I could've had a better flash to use it in.
Thanks for the review!
Pretty cool! it ended a little abruptly, but then i guess the next part of the song would have been difficult to create. I'm proud to announce that someone has brought honor to my music in their submissions. well done, but you could have had the music fade out or something in the end.
nice job man, kept me busy for a while, but I didn't really know if I was progressing or not. I just kept playing, and after 15 minutes of fighting those red space ships I felt as though it was pointless in playing the game. Perhaps if you made stages, that would flash on screen to let you know how far you got... Idunno, not much i can flame on this game because its just flash. Very nicely done otherwise and keep up the good work!
Thanks for the review! I hope you don't mind me using your music in the game... I guess I should have asked first. It probably would have been smart to put a level flasher in there somewhere. I didn't think to do that at all, even though I did it in the first one. I'm glad you liked it though. Thanks again for the review and the kick ass music.
judging by your lack up uploaded material i'd say you're somewhat new to newgrounds. I don't know if you've been at it long before newgrounds but its ok. You definately could do better. Perhaps if you had dots that you wern't allowed to touch, or made it so the circle was easier to complete, then it would start to be interesting. I also agree that you should try this again. get a few people to testplay it before you upload it. Keep at it.
PS The music was AMAZING
im not really new just lazy. thanks for the review.
Pretty good, strange choice of sound fx.
I can see this playing on shoutcast radio. Good job for the most part, though the middle I kinda lost interest. The noises were kinda strange, but I really liked that echoey syko plucked thing you had, that was money.
Yeah, I'm not crazy about that synth that comes in around 2:00, but I'm still workin on it. Thanks for the review though, glad to hear your opinion.
cool. Yeah like the other guy said, I really like how you played it in reverse. Its cool how it turned out so well.
This is pretty sweet, reminded me a lot of Mechwarrior, how lame am I?
A lot of diveristy and the only repetition I felt was noticable was the main orchestra thing, but it wasn't too bad.
Keep up the good work!
Well; Since you actually did review my stuff, And found a general use for it.
Not lame at all mr. Carcase.
Well, I tried to keep it diverse, but I'd also like it to stick with a main pattern, so people would remember it.
Thanks for reviewing, Always a pleasure !
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